[AlKeymaster 12/04/2015 at 8:52 pm Post count: 860]

#11283 |

I’ve done a poster for the click. Take a look and let me know if you spot any mistakes or if you have any suggestions?

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[AndrewKeymaster 12/04/2015 at 9:14 pm Post count: 412]

#11288 |

Nice one!

Comments:
• Do we need to say how many members we have? Could maybe leave “and have about 30 members” out?
• I think we should soften the “you need an induction to climb” bit as people might give up at that. Maybe something like “but please come along and have a chat if you’re interested, or give one of our taster sessions a try.”, which would lead people over to that box.
• “Any dates the wall is not on…” Mistake?
• “Membership of the club”
• “We try to meet on the first weekend”
• “and, if you’re interested in coming, this year‘s main”

[AlKeymaster 12/04/2015 at 9:25 pm Post count: 860]

#11289 |

Thanks, yeah will change them, good suggestions. The wall exception dates wasn’t a mistake, just leaving a space to write them on once known.

[AndrewKeymaster 12/04/2015 at 9:27 pm Post count: 412]

#11290 |

Okay, did wonder if that was the case.

[Fat GitParticipant 13/04/2015 at 6:18 pm Post count: 342]

#11292 |

The pictures at the top would look better if the titles were in appropriate colours on the photo, rather than on a white background.
Might be better to say “Membership of the Mountaineering Council of Scotland (MCoS)” otherwise it’s just a meaningless acronym for most folk.
2015/16 TRIPS & MEETS – I suggest it should be “Check the website for more details, and if you’re interested in coming, this years main trips are:” (added comma and lower case “t”)

[AlKeymaster 13/04/2015 at 6:24 pm Post count: 860]

#11293 |

Thanks guys. Corrected those things. Will bring one along tonight but colours on my printer are naff so will do a final version at work, so any more comments welcome

[AndrewKeymaster 13/04/2015 at 10:45 pm Post count: 412]

#11311 |

Uh oh, Jonathan and I disagree on grammar (see last point)! 😛

[AlKeymaster 14/04/2015 at 9:18 am Post count: 860]

#11313 |

Good job I rewrote that bit entirely then to avoid any violent fallout from climbing-related grammar issue’s…

[AndrewKeymaster 14/04/2015 at 10:09 am Post count: 412]

#11314 |

I was just about to challenge him to a duel—”nut keys at dawn”! 😉

[Fat GitParticipant 14/04/2015 at 4:16 pm Post count: 342]

#11315 |

Well, if we disagree on grammar we can always ask grampa.

Andy! Adjudication needed :p

[AlKeymaster 14/04/2015 at 8:33 pm Post count: 860]

#11316 |

Here’s V2… I resisted the urge to put any more grammar errors on purpose but doesn’t mean there won’t be any!

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[Fat GitParticipant 14/04/2015 at 8:39 pm Post count: 342]

#11318 |

Go with throttle up