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  • Al
    Keymaster
    12/04/2015 at 8:52 pm
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    #11283 |

    I’ve done a poster for the click. Take a look and let me know if you spot any mistakes or if you have any suggestions?

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    Andrew
    Keymaster
    12/04/2015 at 9:14 pm
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    #11288 |

    Nice one!

      Comments:

    • Do we need to say how many members we have? Could maybe leave “and have about 30 members” out?
    • I think we should soften the “you need an induction to climb” bit as people might give up at that. Maybe something like “but please come along and have a chat if you’re interested, or give one of our taster sessions a try.”, which would lead people over to that box.
    • “Any dates the wall is not on…” Mistake?
    • “Membership of the club”
    • “We try to meet on the first weekend”
    • “and, if you’re interested in coming, this year‘s main”
    Al
    Keymaster
    12/04/2015 at 9:25 pm
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    #11289 |

    Thanks, yeah will change them, good suggestions. The wall exception dates wasn’t a mistake, just leaving a space to write them on once known.

    Andrew
    Keymaster
    12/04/2015 at 9:27 pm
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    #11290 |

    Okay, did wonder if that was the case.

    Fat Git
    Participant
    13/04/2015 at 6:18 pm
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    #11292 |

    The pictures at the top would look better if the titles were in appropriate colours on the photo, rather than on a white background.
    Might be better to say “Membership of the Mountaineering Council of Scotland (MCoS)” otherwise it’s just a meaningless acronym for most folk.
    2015/16 TRIPS & MEETS – I suggest it should be “Check the website for more details, and if you’re interested in coming, this years main trips are:” (added comma and lower case “t”)

    Al
    Keymaster
    13/04/2015 at 6:24 pm
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    #11293 |

    Thanks guys. Corrected those things. Will bring one along tonight but colours on my printer are naff so will do a final version at work, so any more comments welcome

    Andrew
    Keymaster
    13/04/2015 at 10:45 pm
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    #11311 |

    Uh oh, Jonathan and I disagree on grammar (see last point)! 😛

    Al
    Keymaster
    14/04/2015 at 9:18 am
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    #11313 |

    Good job I rewrote that bit entirely then to avoid any violent fallout from climbing-related grammar issue’s…

    Andrew
    Keymaster
    14/04/2015 at 10:09 am
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    #11314 |

    I was just about to challenge him to a duel—”nut keys at dawn”! 😉

    Fat Git
    Participant
    14/04/2015 at 4:16 pm
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    #11315 |

    Well, if we disagree on grammar we can always ask grampa.

    Andy! Adjudication needed :p

    Al
    Keymaster
    14/04/2015 at 8:33 pm
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    #11316 |

    Here’s V2… I resisted the urge to put any more grammar errors on purpose but doesn’t mean there won’t be any!

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    Fat Git
    Participant
    14/04/2015 at 8:39 pm
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    #11318 |

    Go with throttle up

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