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#11288 |
Nice one!
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Comments:
- Do we need to say how many members we have? Could maybe leave “and have about 30 members” out?
- I think we should soften the “you need an induction to climb” bit as people might give up at that. Maybe something like “but please come along and have a chat if you’re interested, or give one of our taster sessions a try.”, which would lead people over to that box.
- “Any dates the wall is not on…” Mistake?
- “Membership of the club”
- “We try to meet on the first weekend”
- “and, if you’re interested in coming, this year‘s main”
#11289 |Thanks, yeah will change them, good suggestions. The wall exception dates wasn’t a mistake, just leaving a space to write them on once known.
#11290 |Okay, did wonder if that was the case.
#11292 |The pictures at the top would look better if the titles were in appropriate colours on the photo, rather than on a white background.
Might be better to say “Membership of the Mountaineering Council of Scotland (MCoS)” otherwise it’s just a meaningless acronym for most folk.
2015/16 TRIPS & MEETS – I suggest it should be “Check the website for more details, and if you’re interested in coming, this years main trips are:” (added comma and lower case “t”)#11293 |Thanks guys. Corrected those things. Will bring one along tonight but colours on my printer are naff so will do a final version at work, so any more comments welcome
#11311 |Uh oh, Jonathan and I disagree on grammar (see last point)! 😛
#11313 |Good job I rewrote that bit entirely then to avoid any violent fallout from climbing-related grammar issue’s…
#11314 |I was just about to challenge him to a duel—”nut keys at dawn”! 😉
#11315 |Well, if we disagree on grammar we can always ask grampa.
Andy! Adjudication needed :p
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